Letting my imagination run wild. or.. too wild?

ok...
here's the story, some of my friends have heard this and some have not. Anyway let's get to the picture. although i changed it a bit..

Imagination 1

One day a girl was at her tuition canteen which is packed with people buying an ice cream. She tore the packet open and was squezzing her way out of the crowd when she tripped on someone's foot and fell, sending her ice cream flying in the air. She fell to the floor with a loud thud but when she looked to the floor her ice cream was no where to be found. Suddenly...
"Who's ice cream is this? i'll eat it if no one wants it?" a guy screamed. it seems that this guy saved the ice cream from getting splat to the floor instead of the girl.hmm.. i guess this proves how much food is important to us isn't it? ha ha
"it's mine" the girl shouted. and that's how eveything started. the end.

Imagination 2

A couple was walking nearby a beautiful stream ant there stood a swing.the guy had with him a violin. the girl sat on the swing and swinged herself, enjoying the breath-taking scenery when suddenly she heard ave maria played by the guy.( it sounds wonderously beautiful when this song is played with the violin. just hope the guy knows how to play it!)and... ain't that romantic!!!

I do not know what's wrong with this piece of brain of mine??!!!. it' s just prone to this let's-drift -away-into-imagination-land-sickness!!!all this came out in tuition.

inference: tuitions are the source of my inspiration.
answer: totally not!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and yes...for the 2nd imagination, my friend edith added"he gave her ring" wel.. let me beautify that: He played the song finish and walked towards the girl. he knelt down and gave her a diamond ring which shone so beautifully that her eyes nearly got blind from it's sparkle! ha ha. the end.
notice that i like to use the word the end. hmmm....i like that word! finally they got married. before that he needs to bring her to an optimetrist!